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01/06/2023

The Silver Lining


Father And Childa painting of a woman holding a child, inspired by Jean Metzinger, pixabay, cubism, pixelsorting, two young men, monochrome and red color bleed, wrestling, pontormo, low - poly aliased, young greek man, retro stylised, father with child, ditka, stylized photo, escher, beautiful male twins portrait, ballerina

Scene 1: The Barbershop

A small, old-fashioned barbershop. The smell of aftershave and talcum powder fills the air. The protagonist, JASON, a man in his late 20s, sits in the barber's chair. He's nervous, fidgeting with his red hoody. The barber, an old man with a gruff demeanor, shaves Jason's head. Jason looks at his reflection, trying to recognize the man staring back at him. He leaves the barbershop, his head feeling lighter but his heart heavier. 

Scene 2: The Apartment 

Jason's small, cluttered apartment. He pulls out a silver garment from his closet - a costume he used to wear when he was a street performer. He looks at it, reminiscing about the days when he was carefree and happy. He decides to wear it again, hoping to reignite the spark he once had. 

Scene 3: The City Streets 

Jason, now in his silver garment and red hoody, walks the city streets. He's a spectacle, attracting curious glances. He feels exposed, vulnerable, but also strangely liberated. He decides to perform again, attracting a small crowd. But as he performs, he notices a group of menacing figures watching him. They seem to be looking for someone - him.

Loglines 

 "A man seeking to rediscover himself through his past as a street performer finds himself pursued by a dangerous gang who mistake him for someone else." 

"In a city where conformity is the norm, one man's quest for self-expression draws the ire of a powerful antagonist, forcing him to confront his fears and fight for his freedom."

Main Character's Diary Entry 

 June 1, 2023 

 Today, I did something I haven't done in years. I wore my silver garment and performed on the streets. It felt liberating, like I was finally being true to myself. But it also felt terrifying. I felt exposed, vulnerable. I saw them watching me, those men. They looked dangerous. I don't know what they want, but I have a feeling it's not good. I'm scared, but I can't let them intimidate me. I won't go back to hiding. This is who I am, and I won't apologize for it.

Speculative Step Outline for Further Character Exploration 

  1. Jason confronts the gang, trying to clear the misunderstanding. 
  2. Jason is forced to go on the run, leading to a series of thrilling chases. 
  3. Jason meets other street performers, who help him evade the gang. 
  4. Jason learns to trust others and opens up about his fears and insecurities. 
  5. Jason confronts his past, leading to a deeper understanding of his identity. 
  6. Jason stands up to the gang, leading to a climactic confrontation. 
  7. Jason emerges victorious, gaining newfound confidence and self-acceptance.

Fictional 10 Question Interview with the Main Character 

  1. How do you feel about your decision to perform again? 
  2. What does the silver garment represent for you? 
  3. How has shaving your head affected your self-perception? 
  4. What are your fears regarding the gang? 
  5. How do you plan to confront them? 
  6. How has your past shaped your present? 
  7. What do you hope to achieve by standing up to the gang? 
  8. How has your relationship with other street performers affected you? 
  9. What does freedom mean to you? 
  10. How do you see your future after this ordeal?

Anecdote Title: "The Day When Jason Found His Silver Garment"

Anecdote 

 Jason was a young man, lost in the world, unsure of his place. He worked a mundane job, lived a mundane life. But one day, while cleaning his attic, he found an old silver garment. It was a costume his father used to wear when he was a street performer. Jason decided to try it on. As he looked at himself in the mirror, he felt a spark of excitement. He decided to perform on the streets, just like his father. That day, Jason found not just a silver garment, but a part of himself he never knew existed. 

Scene for Stage 

 Jason, in his silver garment, stands in the middle of the stage. He's surrounded by other street performers, all wearing their unique costumes. They share their stories, their struggles, their dreams. Jason listens, realizing that he's not alone. He's part of a community, a family. He feels a sense of belonging, a sense of purpose. He's no longer just a man in a silver garment. He's a performer, an artist, a dreamer.

Speculative Step Outline of the Entire Story Arc 

  1. Jason, feeling lost and disconnected, shaves his head and finds his father's silver garment. 
  2. Jason decides to perform on the streets, attracting the attention of a dangerous gang. 
  3. Jason goes on the run, leading to thrilling chases and close encounters. 
  4. Jason meets other street performers, who help him evade the gang and share their stories. 
  5. Jason confronts his past and his fears, leading to personal growth and self-discovery. 
  6. Jason stands up to the gang, leading to a climactic confrontation. 
  7. Jason emerges victorious, gaining newfound confidence and self-acceptance.

Story, Genre, and Character Uniqueness 

 The story is a unique blend of drama and action, with a focus on character development. It's about a man's journey of self-discovery and self-expression in a world that seeks to suppress individuality. The protagonist, Jason, is a relatable character, struggling with his identity and fears. His transformation from a lost individual to a confident performer is the heart of the story. The antagonist, the gang, represents the societal pressures and norms that Jason fights against. The story's selling point is its exploration of identity, freedom, and the power of self-expression.

Characterization of the Main Story Driving Force 

Jason exhibits Negative Affectivity (6D11.0) as he struggles with his fears and insecurities. He shows Detachment (6D11.1) as he isolates himself from others, preferring the safety of his apartment. His decision to perform again, despite the risks, shows Disinhibition (6D11.3). His meticulous planning and preparation for his performances reflect Anankastia (6D11.4). However, he doesn't exhibit Dissociality (6D11.2) as he forms meaningful connections with other street performers. His journey is about overcoming his negative affectivity and detachment, embracing his disinhibition, and using his anankastia to his advantage.

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31/05/2023

The Unholy Abomination

On Top Of The Hilla painting of a man riding a horse on top of a hill, a comic book panel, inspired by Stanisław Ignacy Witkiewicz, behind red curtains, penrose stairs, posterized color, group of people in an elevator, vampires, paper cutout, scp-049, ai - generated art, torn edges

Considering the following list of associations :

  • A: Unholy abomination.
  • B: A cat sitting on a piece of paper.
  • C: A Man with his mouth open

- write a story title and an introducing ensemble scene for stage, complete with character descriptions, backstory scenes and an outlook on what might happen next ( = a total of three scenic settings). Then, focussing the main character, write a speculative step outline for further character exploration. In a next step write a characterization guided by the icd 11 framework of classifying and understanding prominent personality traits or patterns ( ICD11 Code : 6D11.0 Negative Affectivity, 6D11.1 Detachment, 6D11.2 Dissociality, 6D11.3 Disinhibition, 6D11.4 Anankastia ) Write two loglines , one of it not longer than 255 characters. Introduce a focus on an overwhelming antagonist or antagonistic energy to the main character. Write a significant anecdote about the life of story characters; start by giving a completion of the standard title „The Day When (person or event x) (to be completed)…“ Create a scene for stage putting anecdotical events into perspective. Write a speculative step outline of the entire story arc considering a cross genre approach and eventually discuss story genre and uniqueness - what’s the selling point?  

Title: 

"Unholy Abomination: The Cat's Tale" 

 Scene 1: The Unholy Abomination 

 In a dark, eerie basement, a grotesque creature (A) lurks in the shadows. This unholy abomination, a result of a failed scientific experiment, is a terrifying mix of man and beast, with a tortured soul. The scene is filled with tension as the creature grapples with its existence, its monstrous form a stark contrast to its human consciousness. 

 Scene 2: The Cat and the Paper 

 In a quaint, sunlit room, a cat (B) sits on a piece of paper. The cat, named Whiskers, is a curious creature, always finding itself in peculiar situations. The paper beneath it holds the blueprint of the experiment that created the abomination. Unbeknownst to Whiskers, it holds the key to the creature's salvation. 

 Scene 3: The Man with an Open Mouth 

 In a bustling city street, a man (C) stands with his mouth agape, a silent scream frozen on his face. This man, Dr. Frederick, is the scientist responsible for the creation of the abomination. He is haunted by his creation, his guilt manifesting as a constant silent scream.

Outlook: 

 The story will unfold as Whiskers, the cat, unknowingly becomes the link between the abomination and Dr. Frederick. The abomination, desperate for salvation, and Dr. Frederick, desperate for redemption, will both find their fates intertwined with the cat.

Step Outline for Character Exploration: 

  1. Whiskers' curiosity leads it to explore the basement, where it encounters the abomination. 
  2. Whiskers' fearlessness and innocence touch the abomination, who finds solace in the cat's company. 
  3. Whiskers' interaction with the abomination leads it to exhibit strange behaviors, drawing Dr. Frederick's attention. 
  4. Dr. Frederick, recognizing the signs, follows Whiskers to the basement, leading to a confrontation with his creation.

Characterization (ICD 11 Framework): 

 Whiskers - 6D11.0 Negative Affectivity: Whiskers displays a high level of curiosity and fearlessness, showing little to no fear or distress even in the presence of the abomination. 

 Dr. Frederick - 6D11.1 Detachment: Dr. Frederick exhibits a high level of guilt and remorse, leading to his withdrawal from society and his constant silent scream. 

 The Abomination - 6D11.2 Dissociality: The abomination, due to its grotesque form and tortured existence, displays a high level of aggression and hostility.

Loglines: 

  1. "In a world where science has gone awry, a curious cat becomes the unlikely link between a tormented scientist and his monstrous creation, leading to a tale of redemption and salvation." 
  2. "A cat, a scientist, and an abomination - an unlikely trio caught in a tale of guilt, redemption, and the power of innocence." 

Antagonist: 

 The overwhelming antagonist in this story is the guilt and remorse that haunts Dr. Frederick, driving him to the brink of madness. It is an antagonistic energy that affects all characters, directly or indirectly.

Anecdote: 

 Title: "The Day When Whiskers Found the Blueprint" Whiskers, in its usual curious manner, stumbled upon a piece of paper one day. Little did it know that this paper held the blueprint of a failed experiment that had resulted in the creation of a monstrous abomination. 

Scene for Stage: 

In a dimly lit room, Dr. Frederick is seen staring at the blueprint, his face contorted with guilt and remorse. Whiskers saunters in, its tail brushing against the blueprint, causing it to flutter and catch Dr. Frederick's attention. The scene is filled with tension as Dr. Frederick's gaze shifts between the blueprint and Whiskers, realization dawning on him.

Step Outline of the Entire Story Arc: 

  1. Introduction of the characters and their individual predicaments. 
  2. Whiskers' discovery of the blueprint and its encounter with the abomination. 
  3. Dr. Frederick's realization of Whiskers' connection with the abomination. 
  4. The confrontation between Dr. Frederick and the abomination. T
  5. he struggle for redemption and salvation. 
  6. The resolution, where the characters find peace in their own ways. 

Story Genre and Uniqueness: 

 The story is a unique blend of horror, drama, and adventure, with a touch of magical realism. The selling point is the unlikely hero - a cat, and the exploration of guilt, redemption, and the power of innocence in a dark, eerie setting. The story also delves into the ethical implications of scientific experiments, adding another layer of depth to the narrative.

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30/05/2023

Fucker!

EvelynEvelyn sitting on a chair talking on a cell phone, a character portrait, inspired by Frieke Janssens, art photography, in an old west cabin, 2 4 mm wide angle anamorphic, horrified expression, arny freytag, taken with a canon eos 5d, decomposition, frederic daoust, funny professional photo

Title:

"FUCKER!"

Ensemble Scene 1: The Isolated Cabin 

In a weathered, old cabin, a woman named EVELYN, in her late 50s, sits alone. She's a retired computer scientist, now living in solitude. The cabin is filled with antiquated machines, relics of her past life. The scene is filled with the hum of the machines and the crackling of the fireplace. Evelyn is seen frequently reaching for a flask, a sign of her struggle with alcohol addiction. 

Ensemble Scene 2: Palais Solitude 

Evelyn's past is unveiled in a grand mansion, the Palais Solitude. Here, she was once a celebrated innovator, surrounded by admirers and colleagues. The scene is filled with laughter, clinking glasses, and the buzz of intellectual conversation. Evelyn's addiction is less pronounced here, but the seeds of it are visible. 

Ensemble Scene 3: The Perfect Crime 

In a state-of-the-art lab, Evelyn's former colleague, RICHARD, is seen committing an act of corporate espionage, stealing Evelyn's work. The scene is tense, filled with the whirring of computers and the ticking of a clock. 

 Ensemble Scene 4: The Unruly Companion 

In the cabin, Evelyn's dog, PINK, a mischievous and unruly creature, adds a touch of chaos to her otherwise orderly life. The scene is filled with the dog's playful barks and Evelyn's exasperated sighs.

Outlook 

Evelyn, living in her cabin with Pink, discovers Richard's betrayal and decides to confront him, setting the stage for a battle of wits, wills, and her own personal demons.

Step Outline for Character Exploration 

  1. Evelyn's daily life in the cabin with Pink, showing her detachment, negative affectivity, and struggle with alcohol addiction. 
  2. Flashbacks to her life at Palais Solitude, revealing her past disinhibition, anankastia, and the beginnings of her addiction. 
  3. Discovery of Richard's betrayal, triggering her dissociality and exacerbating her addiction. 
  4. Evelyn's decision to confront Richard, showing her determination, resilience, and struggle to overcome her addiction.

ICD 11 Framework Characterization 

Evelyn exhibits 6D11.0 Negative Affectivity, often feeling anxious and vulnerable, exacerbated by her addiction. She also shows 6D11.1 Detachment, preferring solitude over social interaction. Her 6D11.2 Dissociality is evident in her disregard for Richard's rights. Evelyn's past is marked by 6D11.3 Disinhibition, often acting impulsively, and 6D11.4 Anankastia, being overly conscientious and perfectionistic.

Loglines

"In 'FUCKER!', a reclusive computer scientist, battling alcohol addiction and living with her unruly dog Pink, must confront her past and her betrayer, using her intellect and old machines to reclaim her stolen work." 

"An addicted scientist and her mischievous dog confront betrayal."

Antagonist 

Richard, Evelyn's former colleague, is the antagonist. He's a cunning and ambitious man, willing to do anything to climb the corporate ladder. 

 Anecdote 

"The Day When Evelyn and Pink Discovered the Betrayal" - Evelyn, while fixing an old machine with Pink causing mischief, stumbles upon evidence of Richard's theft. This discovery shatters her world, forcing her to confront her past and her addiction. 

 Anecdotal Scene 

In the cabin, Evelyn finds a hidden message in the machine, revealing Richard's betrayal. The scene isfilled with tension and shock, as Evelyn grapples with the revelation, while Pink adds a touch of chaos. Evelyn reaches for her flask but stops, deciding to face her problems sober.

Story Arc Outline 

  1. Evelyn's secluded life in the cabin with Pink, marked by her struggle with addiction. 
  2. Flashbacks to her past at Palais Solitude, revealing the beginnings of her addiction. 
  3. Discovery of Richard's betrayal, exacerbating her addiction. 
  4. Evelyn's decision to confront Richard, and her struggle to overcome her addiction. 
  5. The confrontation and resolution, with Evelyn overcoming both her betrayer and her addiction.

Genre and Uniqueness 

"FUCKER!" is a cross-genre story, blending elements of drama, mystery, and science fiction. The unique selling point is the protagonist - a reclusive, older woman scientist, a character rarely seen in mainstream media, and her unruly dog, Pink. The story also explores themes of betrayal, resilience, and the human relationship with technology, all set against the backdrop of a woman's battle with addiction.

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27/05/2023

Social Realism - A man standing in front of a mirror.

John DoeThe Transitions Model

User:

Considering „Social Realism - A man standing in front of a mirror.“ as a title, write a scene for stage, complete with character description, backstory scene and an outlook on what might happen next ( = a total of three scenic settings). Then, focussing the main character, write a speculative step outline for further character exploration. In a next step write a characterization guided by the icd 11 framework of classifying and understanding prominent personality traits or patterns ( ICD11 Code : 6D11.0 Negative Affectivity, 6D11.1 Detachment, 6D11.2 Dissociality, 6D11.3 Disinhibition, 6D11.4 Anankastia ) Write two loglines , one of it not longer than 255 characters. Introduce a focus on an overwhelming antagonist or antagonistic energy to the main character. Write a significant anecdote about the life of story characters; start by giving a completion of the standard title „The Day When (person or event x) (to be completed)…“ Create a scene for stage putting anecdotical events into perspective. Write a speculative step outline of the entire story arc considering a cross genre approach and eventually discuss story genre and uniqueness - what’s the selling point? 

Assistant:

Character Description: 

 Name: John Doe 

 John is a middle-aged man, with a weary face that tells a story of hardship and struggle. His eyes, once bright and full of life, now carry a dullness that reflects his disillusionment with life. He's of average height, with a slight stoop in his posture, as if the weight of the world is on his shoulders. His clothes are worn and faded, much like his spirit. 

Backstory Scene: 

 The stage is dimly lit. John is standing in front of a mirror in a small, dingy apartment. The room is sparsely furnished, with peeling wallpaper and a single, flickering light bulb. John stares at his reflection, his face a mask of regret and despair. He's just lost his job, another casualty of the economic downturn. He's struggling to make ends meet, and the future looks bleak. He's a man on the edge, grappling with the harsh realities of life.

Outlook on What Might Happen Next: 

 John's life is at a crossroads. He could succumb to his circumstances, or he could fight back. He could let his life spiral out of control, or he could take control of his destiny. He could let the world beat him down, or he could rise above it. The choice is his to make.

Speculative Step Outline for Further Character Exploration:

  1. John's struggle with unemployment and financial instability. 
  2. His battle with depression and feelings of worthlessness. 
  3. His attempts to find a new job and regain control of his life. 
  4. His interactions with other characters, including his estranged wife and his teenage daughter. 
  5. His journey towards self-discovery and self-acceptance.

Characterization (ICD 11 Framework): 

  • 6D11.0 Negative Affectivity: John often feels sad and hopeless. He has a pessimistic outlook on life and struggles with feelings of worthlessness. 
  • 6D11.1 Detachment: John has isolated himself from his family and friends. He prefers to be alone, finding it difficult to connect with others. 
  • 6D11.2 Dissociality: John has a disregard for societal norms and rules. He's often in conflict with others and struggles to maintain relationships. 
  • 6D11.3 Disinhibition: John often acts impulsively, without considering the consequences of his actions. 
  • 6D11.4 Anankastia: John is a perfectionist, often setting unrealistically high standards for himself. He's rigid in his thinking and struggles with flexibility.

Loglines: 

  1.  "A man on the brink of despair, grappling with the harsh realities of life, must make a choice: succumb to his circumstances or fight back." 
  2. "In a world that's left him behind, John Doe must confront his demons, reclaim his life, and find hope amidst despair."

Antagonist: 

 The antagonist in John's life is the societal system that has failed him. It's the economic downturn, the job loss, the financial instability. It's the societal expectations and norms that he struggles to meet. It's the world that's left him behind.

Anecdote: 

 Title: "The Day When John Doe Lost His Job" 

 John had been working at the factory for over 20 years. It was a job he didn't particularly enjoy, but it paid the bills. Then, one day, he was called into the manager's office. He was told that the factory was closing down, and he was being laid off. That day, John lost more than just his job. He lost his sense of self-worth, his purpose, his hope.

Scene - Putting Anecdotal Events into Perspective: 

 The stage is set in the same small, dingy apartment. John is sitting on a worn-out couch, staring blankly at an old photograph. It's a picture of him on his first day at the factory, young and full of hope. He looks at his reflection in the mirror, comparing the man in the picture with the man he's become. He's lost, but he's not defeated. Not yet.

Speculative Step Outline of the Entire Story Arc: 

  1. Introduction of John and his life. 
  2. John loses his job. 
  3. John battles with depression and feelings of worthlessness. 
  4. John's estranged wife and daughter re-enter his life. 
  5. John begins his journey of self-discovery and acceptance. 
  6. John fights against the societal system that's failed him. 
  7. John finds a new job and begins to regain control of his life. 
  8. John reconciles with his family. 
  9. John finds hope amidst despair.

Story Genre and Uniqueness: 

 The story falls under the genre of Social Realism, with elements of Drama. It's a raw and honest portrayal of the struggles faced by the common man in today's society. The uniqueness lies in its authenticity and its exploration of societal issues through the lens of a single character. The selling point is its relatability and its ability to evoke empathy in the audience. It's a story of struggle, but it's also a story of hope and resilience. It's a story that reflects the realities of life, but also the potential for change and growth.

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26/05/2023

Doorways


In Suit And Tiea painting of a man in a suit and tie, inspired by Wyndham Lewis, featured on pixiv, cubism, noise effects filter, segmented broken glass shards, destroyed mountains, ca. 2001, tarot card style, people drowning, 3 d, scanned 2400 dpi, photoscan

Character Description:

John: 

A middle-aged man, John is a quiet, introspective individual. He has a slight stoop from years of working at a desk job, and his eyes carry a hint of melancholy. He's always well-dressed, favoring muted colors and simple patterns. He has a habit of fidgeting with his wedding ring, a sign of his lingering attachment to his late wife. 

Emma: 

Emma is a young woman in her late twenties. She's vibrant, full of life, and has a contagious laugh. She dresses casually, often in bright colors that reflect her personality. She's John's daughter, and despite her cheerful demeanor, there's a hint of sadness in her eyes - a testament to the loss they both share.

Backstory Scene: 

 The stage is set with a simple living room. There's a couch in the center, a coffee table in front of it, and two doorways on either side of the stage. John is sitting on the couch, staring blankly at the television. Emma enters from the left doorway, holding two cups of coffee. She hands one to John, then sits beside him. They sit in silence, the only sound being the low hum of the television. 

 Emma breaks the silence, "Dad, we need to talk about mom." John stiffens, his grip on the coffee cup tightening. They delve into a conversation about their shared loss, their memories, and their struggle to move on. The scene ends with a promise to each other to start healing, to step through the doorway of grief and into acceptance.

Dream Sequence: 

 John falls asleep on the couch, the television still humming in the background. The stage dims and when the lights come back up, it's transformed into a whimsical kitchen. John is standing in front of a vibrant, glowing dishwasher, a familiar figure beside him - his late wife, bathed in a soft glow. 

 JOHN: (Stammering) "Is that really you?" 

 WIFE: (Gently) "Yes, it's me, John. But in this dream, I'm not just your wife. I'm also this magic dishwasher." 

 John looks at the dishwasher, now glowing even more brightly. The door opens, revealing a sparkling interior that twinkles like a starry night sky. Suddenly, cups with tiny, expressive faces painted on them start jumping into the dishwasher, causing a bit of a commotion. 

 JOHN: (Surprised) "What's happening?" 

 WIFE: (Laughs) "Oh, they're just excited. They love being cleaned. But sometimes, they get a little too enthusiastic." 

 As they talk, one particularly eager cup jumps in prematurely, causing a small flood of soapy water to spill onto the kitchen floor. John and his wife laugh, and she waves her hand, magically cleaning up the mess. 

 WIFE: (Smiling) "See, even in dreams, dishwashers can cause a bit of trouble." 

 John and his wife engage in a heartfelt conversation, reminiscing about their past and expressing their unspoken feelings. As the conversation draws to a close, John finally feels a sense of closure and comfort, knowing that his wife's love will always be with him, even in the form of a magic dishwasher.

Outlook Scene: 

 John wakes up on the couch, the first light of dawn breaking through the windows. He looks around the now-empty living room, feeling a renewed sense of peace and strength to move forward in life. Emma enters from the left doorway, looking at John with concern. 

 EMMA: "Dad, are you okay?" 

 JOHN: (Nods, smiling) "I am, Emma. I think... I think I'm ready to move forward." 

 The scene ends with Emma and John, a renewed sense of hope in their eyes, ready to step through the doorway of acceptance and into a new chapter of their lives.

Logline: 

 In "Doorways: Two people sitting on a couch, doorways," a grieving father and his estranged daughter navigate their shared loss, confront their past, and journey towards healing, all while sitting on their living room couch. Through a magical dream encounter with his late wife, the father finds the strength to move forward, symbolizing the doorways of their past and future.

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25/05/2023

Hamster - Rewrite

Herds Fightinga bed covered in a black and white blanket, a silk screen, inspired by M. C. Escher, behance contest winner, pig pig pig, interior gameplay screenshot, seen from above, herds fighting, swimming to surface, under bridge, sausages, thick blue lines, top - down photo

User:

Considering " the Hamster" essay and report ->

http://benedikt-eickhoff.de/essays/2023/05/hamster-a-black-and-white-dog-laying-on-top-of-a-blanket/ , http://benedikt-eickhoff.de/essays/2023/05/report-on-hamster-1/  

-> write a scene for stage in unexaggerated, almost absurdist style (Ionesco , Beckett), complete with character description, backstory scene and an outlook on what might happen next ( = a total of three scenic settings). Then, considering the main character, please write a character assessment according to the icd 11 trait domain specifiers for personality assessment and write a speculative step outline for further character exploration. Eventually write a logline . 

Assistant:

Based on the information from the essays, here is a stage scene written in an unexaggerated, almost absurdist style: 

 Character Description: 

Hamster, a medium-sized black and white Border Collie mix, is the protagonist. His expressive eyes and slightly unkempt fur give him a charming, scruffy appearance. He has a distinctive black patch over one eye, adding to his unique charm. 

 Backstory Scene: 

 Setting: 

A small, cozy living room. A worn-out blanket is spread on the floor. Hamster is laying on it, his eyes following the movements of his owner, Grace. 

 Grace: (Sighs deeply, looking at a stack of unpaid bills) "Oh, Hamster, what are we going to do?"

 Hamster: (Tilts his head, looking at Grace with understanding eyes) 

 Narrator: "Grace had recently lost her job, and the bills were piling up. Hamster, her loyal companion, seemed to understand her worries. He had been with her through thick and thin, always providing comfort and companionship." 

 Outlook Scene: 

 Setting: 

The same living room, a few days later. Grace is on the phone, her face lighting up with hope. 

 Grace: (Excitedly) "Yes, yes, I can start immediately! Thank you so much!" 

 Hamster: (Wags his tail, sensing Grace's excitement) 

 Narrator: "Grace had finally found a job. Things were looking up, but it would require her to travel a lot. How would Hamster cope with her absence?" 

 ICD-11 Trait Domain Specifiers for Personality Assessment: 

Hamster is generally calm and composed (Negative Affectivity), quite attached to Grace (Detachment), friendly and loving (Antagonism), well-behaved (Disinhibition), and flexible (Anankastia). 

 Step Outline for Further Character Exploration: 

  • Explore Hamster's reaction to Grace's frequent absences due to her new job. 
  • Show Hamster developing a new routine or hobby to cope with Grace's absence. 
  • Introduce a new character, a neighbor who starts taking care of Hamster when Grace is away. 
  • Develop a bond between Hamster and the neighbor, showing Hamster's ability to adapt and form new relationships. 
  • Reveal a crisis where Grace has to move for her job, leaving Hamster behind with the neighbor. 

Logline: 

In a world where humans are constantly on the move, a loyal and understanding dog named Hamster must navigate the challenges of his owner's frequent absences, forming unexpected bonds and learning to cope with change, proving that love and friendship can be found in the most unexpected places.

User:

Please rewrite, considering a dark, pessimistic and absurdist style - 

Assistant:

Character Description: 

Hamster, a medium-sized Border Collie mix, is our protagonist. His black and white fur is always slightly unkempt, adding to his aura of melancholy. A distinctive black patch over one eye gives him a look of perpetual skepticism. 

 Backstory Scene: 

 Setting: 

A dimly lit, cramped living room. A threadbare blanket lies on the floor. Hamster is sprawled on it, his eyes tracking the movements of his owner, Grace. 

 Grace: (Sighs deeply, staring at a pile of unpaid bills) "Oh, Hamster, what's the point?" 

 Hamster: (Tilts his head, his gaze on Grace heavy with existential dread) 

 Narrator: "Grace, jobless and drowning in debt, finds no solace in the world. Hamster, her only companion, seems to share her despair. He's been with her through the best and worst of times, a silent witness to the human condition." 

 Outlook Scene: 

 Setting: 

The same living room, a few days later. The light is dimmer, the room colder. Grace is on the phone, her face a mask of forced optimism. 

 Grace: (Forced cheer) "Yes, yes, I can start immediately! Thank you so much!" 

 Hamster: (Wags his tail listlessly, sensing Grace's feigned excitement) 

 Narrator: "Grace has found a job, a small glimmer in the vast darkness. But it requires her to travel, to leave Hamster alone. How will Hamster endure the solitude?" 

 ICD-11 Trait Domain Specifiers for Personality Assessment: 

Hamster is generally calm, almost to the point of apathy (Negative Affectivity), deeply attached to Grace, perhaps to an unhealthy extent (Detachment), friendly but with a hint of melancholy (Antagonism), well-behaved, almost robotic (Disinhibition), and flexible, a survival trait in a world that makes no sense (Anankastia). 

Step Outline for Further Character Exploration: 

  • Delve into Hamster's despair as he grapples with Grace's frequent absences. 
  • Show Hamster developing a routine or hobby to distract himself from the crushing loneliness. 
  • Introduce a new character, a neighbor who begins to care for Hamster in Grace's absence, adding another layer of absurdity to Hamster's existence. 
  • Develop a bond between Hamster and the neighbor, highlighting Hamster's desperate need for companionship. 
  • Unveil a crisis where Grace is forced to move for her job, leaving Hamster in the care of the neighbor, a poignant symbol of abandonment. 

Logline: 

In a world devoid of meaning, a dog named Hamster grapples with his owner's frequent absences, forming bonds with strangers and learning to endure the absurdity of existence, a testament to the bleak reality of life and the desperate search for companionship.

User:

I like this dog ...

Assistant:

I'm glad to hear that! Hamster seems to be a very special dog, indeed. His loyalty, understanding, and ability to adapt to changing circumstances make him a truly endearing character. If you have any more questions or need further assistance, feel free to ask!

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25/05/2023

Hamster: A black and white dog laying on top of a blanket.

Sinking as if Drowninga black and white drawing of two birds on a rock, by Ellen Gallagher, pixiv, underground comix, beautiful mouse - girl, pink tigers, in the shape of a rat, geological strata, ffffound, descriptive art, odontophobia, an anthropomorphic rat, sinking as if drowing, featured in pictoplasma, m.c escher

Character Description:

Hamster is a medium-sized black and white dog, a Border Collie mix with expressive eyes that seem to understand more than a typical dog. He has a distinctive black patch over one eye, and his fur is always slightly unkempt, giving him a charming, scruffy appearance.

Backstory Scene:

Setting: A small, cozy living room. A worn-out blanket is spread on the floor, and Hamster is laying on it, his eyes following the movements of his owner, a middle-aged woman named Grace.

 Grace: (Sighs deeply, looking at a stack of unpaid bills) "Oh, Hamster, what are we going to do?"

 Hamster: (Tilts his head, looking at Grace with understanding eyes) 

 Narrator: "Grace had recently lost her job, and the bills were piling up. Hamster, her loyal companion, seemed to understand her worries. He had been with her through thick and thin, always providing comfort and companionship." 

 Outlook Scene: 

 Setting: The same living room, a few days later. Grace is on the phone, her face lighting up with hope.

 Grace: (Excitedly) "Yes, yes, I can start immediately! Thank you so much!" 

 Hamster: (Wags his tail, sensing Grace's excitement) 

 Narrator: "Grace had finally found a job. Things were looking up, but it would require her to travel a lot. How would Hamster cope with her absence?"

ICD-11 Trait Domain Specifiers for Personality Assessment: 

  • Negative Affectivity: Hamster is generally a calm and composed dog. He doesn't show signs of frequent distress or worry. 
  • Detachment: Hamster is quite attached to Grace, showing signs of distress when she's not around. He's not detached or aloof. 
  • Antagonism: Hamster is a friendly and loving dog. He doesn't show signs of antagonism or aggression.
  • Disinhibition: Hamster is well-behaved and doesn't show signs of impulsivity or recklessness. 
  • Anankastia: Hamster is flexible and doesn't show signs of rigidity or perfectionism.
Step Outline for Further Character Exploration: 
  • Step 1: Explore Hamster's reaction to Grace's frequent absences due to her new job. 
  • Step 2: Show Hamster developing a new routine or hobby to cope with Grace's absence. 
  • Step 3: Introduce a new character, a neighbor who starts taking care of Hamster when Grace is away.
  • Step 4: Develop a bond between Hamster and the neighbor, showing Hamster's ability to adapt and form new relationships. 
  • Step 5: Reveal a crisis where Grace has to move for her job, leaving Hamster behind with the neighbor.

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25/05/2023

The Demise


Waving Handsa black and white photo of a person with their hands in the shape of a heart, a silk screen, inspired by Hannah Höch, behance contest winner, abstract illusionism, page scan from book, petra collins and mc. escher, waving hands, 2. 5 d illustration, deepsea, cut, sangsoo jeong, illustration

The Meta-Script:

Considering list item no (1) as a title - write a scene for stage, complete with character description, backstory scene and an outlook on what might happen next ( = a total of three scenic settings). Then, considering the main character, write a character assessment according to the icd 11 trait domain specifiers for personality assessment and write a speculative step outline for further character exploration.

Title: The Demise

 Character Description: 

Meet John, a man in his early thirties with a rugged appearance. He has a scruffy beard, unkempt hair, and a pair of piercing blue eyes that have seen more than their fair share of hardship. His clothes are worn and faded, suggesting a life of outdoor living. Despite his rough exterior, there's a gentleness in his demeanor, a quiet strength that speaks of resilience and endurance. 

 Backstory Scene: 

The scene opens with John laying in the grass, his eyes closed, his face turned towards the sun. He's in a vast meadow, surrounded by wildflowers and tall grass that sway gently in the breeze. This is a place of peace, a stark contrast to the turmoil that John has experienced in his life. 

 John was once a successful businessman, living in the city with his wife and two children. But a series of unfortunate events, including a failed business venture and the tragic death of his wife, led to his downfall. Unable to cope with his losses, John left everything behind and retreated to the countryside, seeking solace in solitude. 

 Outlook on What Might Happen Next: 

As John lays in the grass, he hears the distant sound of a car approaching. He opens his eyes and sits up, watching as a sleek black car pulls up on the dirt road nearby. A woman steps out - it's his sister, Emily, who he hasn't seen in years. 

 Emily has been searching for John, hoping to bring him back home and help him rebuild his life. But John is hesitant, still haunted by his past and fearful of facing the world again. The scene ends with Emily extending a hand towards John, an offer of help and a chance for redemption. 

 ICD-11 Trait Domain Specifiers for Personality Assessment: 

  1.  Negative Affectivity: John exhibits high levels of negative affectivity, as seen in his retreat from society following his personal losses and his difficulty in coping with stress. 
  2. Detachment: John shows high detachment, preferring solitude and avoiding social interactions. 
  3. Antagonism: John exhibits low antagonism. He does not display manipulative or deceitful behavior.
  4. Disinhibition: John shows low disinhibition. He does not act impulsively or recklessly. 
  5. Anankastia: John's level of anankastia is unclear from the current information. 

Speculative Step Outline for Further Character Exploration: 

  1.  John's initial refusal of Emily's offer, showing his fear of facing his past and his struggle with change. 
  2. A flashback scene revealing more about John's life before his downfall, providing insight into his character and his relationships. 
  3. John's gradual opening up to Emily, showing his vulnerability and his longing for his old life. 
  4. A confrontation between John and his past, perhaps in the form of visiting his old home or meeting someone from his past. 
  5. John's decision to face his fears and accept Emily's help, marking the start of his journey towards healing and redemption. 
  6. The development of John's relationship with Emily, showing how their interactions influence his outlook on life and his personal growth. 
  7. John's eventual return to society, showing his resilience and his ability to rebuild his life despite his past hardships.

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19/05/2023

Tucho's Rheinsberg

Page 1 - Screenplay SequenceFADE IN: INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY A FATHER, an older man with a weathered face, sits on a couch, staring out a large window at a scenic view. SON, a curious young man, enters the room. SON (V.O) Father wanted to visit Tucho's Rheinsberg. I was the only one who was interested. CUT TO: INT. TAXI - DAY Father and Son sit in the backseat. Father looks at Son. FATHER You'll have to be a brave boy, we don't know what the place is like. CUT TO: INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT Father and Son stand over a bed. Father is nodding, his face filled with longing and nostalgia. SON How do you know I won't just run away? FATHER No, you won't. CUT TO: INT. STUDY ROOM - DAY Father and Son sit in front of a drawing on a wall. SON And how do you know I won't try to throw myself under a train? FATHER No, you won't. CUT TO:
Page 2 - Screenplay SequenceINT. BEDROOM - DAY Father leans over a bed, looking at Son. SON And how do you know that I won't just go out in the forest and get run over by a truck? FATHER No, you won't. CUT TO: INT. NEUTRAL SPACE - DAY Father and Son stand in a minimalist space. SON I don't know, I have an intuition. FATHER A what intuition? CUT TO: EXT. OPEN SPACE - DAY Father and Son stand in front of a red, white, and blue wall. SON I don't know how you manage to live, but I know that I want to know how you manage to live. I want to know how you manage to live, Father. FATHER well, I don't know how you manage to live, but I know that I want to know how vou manage to live. I want to know how you manage to live. SON Stop it, Father. FADE OUT

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Rheinsberg

Page 1a painting of an older man and a younger man, a painting, by Luc Tuymans, cgsociety, de stijl, cut out collage, jony ives, with his back to the viewer, blue-eyed man, lee kuan yew, archival pigment print, metmuseum, oils on canvas, 3/4 profile, two characters, on a canva

Page 1:

Canvas Description: A simple living room scene with a large window at the back showing a scenic view of a beautiful, serene place, possibly Tucho's Rheinsberg. A father, DAD, is sitting on a couch, looking at the view longingly. Speech Bubble (Narrator): "This is a story about a father's longing to visit a place called Tucho's Rheinsberg."

Page 2an open book with a picture of a man holding a baby, a cubist painting, by Wolf Vostell, featured on pixiv, modular constructivism, blue torn fabric, hyperdetailed 3 d matte painting, 62 x 47 inches, globes, colourised, chinese men in a prison, edward okun

 Page 2: 

 Canvas Description: The NARRATOR, his child, enters the stage, looking at DAD who is still absorbed in the view. Speech Bubble (Narrator): "You're thinking about Tuchos Rheinsberg again, aren't you, Dad?"

Page 3a couple of men standing over a bed in a room, a digital rendering, inspired by Louis-Léopold Boilly, cgsociety, action painting, old man doing with mask, anamorphic wide angle lens, russian flag, martha rosler, an ai generated image, making love, app, ikea manual, 360º, cursed images

 Page 3: 

 Canvas Description: DAD nods, still looking at the view. His face is filled with longing and nostalgia. Speech Bubble (Dad): "There's something about that place... I've always wanted to visit." 

Page 4a man sitting in front of a drawing on a wall, an ultrafine detailed painting, inspired by Brett Whiteley, pixiv, stuckism, back of head, 2 d depth map, shaved bald head, blue cape, work in progress, torn edges, uncompressed png, monks, david ligare masterpiece, crossing the blue horizon

 Page 4: Canvas Description: NARRATOR sits next to DAD, also looking at the view. There's a soft smile on their face. Speech Bubble (Narrator): "And I've always wanted to go with you." 

Page 5a man in a blue shirt leaning over a bed, a stock photo, inspired by Caesar van Everdingen, pixabay contest winner, art informel, in a city park, i slept in segments last night, surgery table, panoramic anamorphic, two skinny old people, the kiss, chalet, bald on top, detmold, ambulance

 Page 5: Canvas Description: DAD turns to look at NARRATOR, surprised. His eyes are wide and his eyebrows are raised. Speech Bubble (Dad): "Really? Why's that?" 

Page 6a painting of a man and a woman shaking hands, a minimalist painting, inspired by Felice Casorati, de stijl, bbc promotional artwork, the caretaker, recursive portrait, 1970, blue or red, birthday painting, reconstruction, idealised, robert maplethorpe, blair armitage, royal painting

 Page 6: Canvas Description: NARRATOR shrugs, looking a bit shy. They're looking down, avoiding DAD's gaze. Speech Bubble (Narrator): "Maybe because... it's a part of you. And I want to understand that part." 

Page 7a group of people standing in front of a red, white and blue wall, an ultrafine detailed painting, by Wilhelm Sasnal, figurativism, backside of scenography elements, 3d collage, father figure image, five points of articulation, 64x64, ted naysmith, hamlet

 Page 7: Canvas Description: They share a moment of silence, looking at the view of Tuchos Rheinsberg. The room is bathed in the soft glow of the setting sun. Speech Bubble (Narrator): "And so, we dream of Tuchos Rheinsberg, a shared desire, a shared journey."

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